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    Senior Member arne saknussen's Avatar
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    Wormhole

    I think this needs another element or two, but I think I'm getting here. Your thoughts are appreciated.


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    Re: Wormhole

    I like where your going with these, but I keep feeling that the reflection underneath is not helping. I would try suspending the slinky coil from wires and shoot the light through it experimenting with different angles and lighting. That will get it off the table surface and rid the reflection.

    The reflecion of the surface could be used as part of the image if you wanted but you would have to use more of it and in a way that added to the symetry and overall image rather than an after thought
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    Re: Wormhole

    I would shoot it at a different angle.... it looks like almost like product picture.... not creative enough I think.

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    Re: Wormhole

    your slinky shots are getting better and better.
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