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Thread: The workplace

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    The workplace

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    Last edited by Seb; 04-08-2010 at 10:46 PM.

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    Re: The workplace

    Seb,

    I like the contrast between dark and light in this photo, and the inclusion of other people in the photo makes it work. My only critique is that I think I would prefer to have seen all of the pillar on the left.

    I like the spot of light shinging from the roof onto the floor. and I think you've just got the right amount of detail in the dark roof, which complements the brighter areas.

    Nicely captured

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    Re: The workplace

    I think you framed it well and the exposure is good. It gives a great perspective as to the size of this place. From your other pics, i did not see that this building was so expansive.
    Good one for the series.
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    Re: The workplace

    Seb,

    Great shot. Along with what others have said, I think this would look great, if not better, in black and white. I love the "spotlight" in the centre of the photo, an interesting contrast.

    Well done,

    Jared

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    Re: The workplace

    Quote Originally Posted by Seb
    Comments are welcome.

    Seb
    Thank you guys for all your comments and suggestions. This was officialy the last picture of this series as far as I can see. I guess it's about time that I attack another subject

    regards

    Seb

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