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    Working The Flowers

    Taken at a State Park in PA where many native plants attract these beautiful creatures.
    C&C please.
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    Re: Working The Flowers

    What a great catch! And so sharp as well.

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    Re: Working The Flowers

    Thank you.

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    Re: Working The Flowers

    Beautiful capture. I would like to see a touch more room at the top. - Terry
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    Re: Working The Flowers

    That's as much 'top' as there is for this shot. Thank you for the comment.

    Ed

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    Re: Working The Flowers

    very nice, love the subtle yellow of the butterfly

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    Re: Working The Flowers

    Yep very nice. I personally want more saturation and contrast., but I am perverse.

    Nice shot.

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    Re: Working The Flowers

    Quote Originally Posted by NKP68
    That's as much 'top' as there is for this shot. Thank you for the comment.
    That's too bad. As a critique it's still a useful comment, though. Keep it in mind for next time
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    Re: Working The Flowers

    It's a nice butterfly and a nice flower. I think maybe a bit more depth-of-field would have been nice as the back half of the butterfly is out-of-focus. That does make the background softer, though.

    The biggest problems for me are the exposure and the color. It's very flat and I think a bit underexposed. Even worse, it's very cyan - not at all natural looking. Luckily, these are things that are easily fixed in post-processing. If you shot it RAW then the color balance will be very easy to fix. And the exposure should benefit from a simple levels adjustment to brighten it up and add a bit of contrast.

    I hope that's useful to you. Thanks for sharing
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    Re: Working The Flowers

    Thanks Photo-John, I did shoot this in RAW and I'll give your suggestions a try.

    Ed

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