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You might try the first one in b/w, too.
I agree that a bit more room on left in second one would help.
We usually think that subjects should be looking into the photo frame but in this case I think her looking out adds that certain something that makes this shot even more interesting.
I like that you have isolated your subjects more than you usually do.