Woman and Bike II

[GB1]

Some additional photographs of a model with her bike. Shot these is pretty harsh lighting and we did our best to find angles to make the best of it.

C&C welcome. I like elements of the shots, but could use ideas on editing. TKS

Gb

[fx101]

The last picture's the keeper. There's nothing that says WOW about the other ones. Either saturate it a bit or go for a selective colour look. Also, light up her hand a bit. I think the composition is excellent on the last shot.

[cah027]

I like the background in the first better than the second one. The building in the background on the second one is distracting. I agree with fx101, it would look better with her hand a little brighter.

[GB1]

Thanks for the feedback. The bottom shot has a vignette, which reaches her hand and makes it a bit darker.. I'll see about eliminating that a little.

Thanks also for commenting on 1 and 2. I think they're more portrait than artistic. I guess that building is a bit distracting...

G