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    Winter in th Sierras

    I took this in nyack,California on my way back from Sparks,Nevada,my camera was set to landscape mode.
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    Re: Winter in th Sierras

    Wow, nice. I would like to see more saturation, but I am a whore for saturation, so listen to someone else.

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    Re: Winter in th Sierras

    Nice composition. I might crop a bit of the highway out of the foreground.

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    Re: Winter in th Sierras

    thanks,much appreciated,i haven't played with it yet,but will do as suggested to see what it looks like,thanks again
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    Re: Winter in th Sierras

    Very nice, Lou. That rock wall is the icing on the cake. In a more perfect world, I would like to have seen a better focus on the trees on that left hill -- but that's a pretty minor nitpick
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    Re: Winter in th Sierras

    I agree with Paula, on the better focus, your exposure was 1/250 @ F10 and ISO of 110. IMHO a higer apature number, increasing DOF, would have helped, and I would guess that F16 or F22 would have brought everything into focus. Sometimes I get lazy and have to force my self to use an exposure mode of somethng other than Programed AE, but it is often worth the effort. Otherwise an extremely nice image.
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    Re: Winter in th Sierras

    This is nice but the road needs a bike similar to your avatar with a helmet on the seat to add an extra dimension to the photo or you could take the easy option and crop all the road out.

    I agree about the focus.

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    Re: Winter in th Sierras

    Quote Originally Posted by readingr
    This is nice but the road needs a bike similar to your avatar with a helmet on the seat to add an extra dimension to the photo or you could take the easy option and crop all the road out.

    I agree about the focus.

    Roger R.
    all pf your comments are vrey encouraging,i have been struggling with my lack of being able to take good pics,I was in such a hurry to get off the hill that I just put it in landscape mode to see what I could come up with,I would like to see what kind of crazy person would ride a bike in those conditions though,I ride mine when it is raingng,but never in the snow,thanks again guys,
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    Re: Winter in th Sierras

    Nice scene Lou, I would crop a little on the bottom and if possible reduce the crop on the top.

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