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    Wine Glass With Light Rays

    Still working on getting this right. My problem with this shot is the light trail on the same horizon as the water level. But, hey, I'm getting closer. I also wish I could make the trail more smooth.


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    Re: Wine Glass With Light Rays

    another interesting shot, you have fixed the horizon , and included the whole cup

    the wine looks very fair, is it a bit overexposed or is it really that clear red?
    for some reason the cup does not look very sharp, maybe an effect of the moving light around it ?

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    Re: Wine Glass With Light Rays

    It looks really nice. Another thing to try is to put the camera on bulb with NO light source and paint the glass repetitively with the laser. You can make the glass be nothing but a lacework of light I think...

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    Re: Wine Glass With Light Rays

    The cup's tilting CW so you should first fix that. I like the lines, but they would work soooo much better if the background was d a r k ! You probably need to invest in some black cloth to pull that off.

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