Windows To The Sky

[Addies Granddaddy]

For lack of a more imaginative title. C & C welcome.Any suggestions on how to make this better?
John

[gahspidy]

There is alot of lens distortion here and on a dead on architectural shot like this you might want to fix that. Other than that I think just having alittle more room at the bottom of the frame would improve.

[Frog]

I think the harsh light is killing it.
I think there are several possibilities for tighter shots here.
One door, a door and window. Those stars add a touch that grabs my eye.

[Themage]

I would like to add that the center rain spout splits the image in half as well to my eyes. Look a bit bright to me as well.

[Greg McCary]

I agree with Gary on fixing the lens distortion. You might go back and isolate three of the upper windows with the strong reflection. Edit it so it looks as though it were shot dead on.

[Addies Granddaddy]

Thanks for your comments, guys. I did do a closeup of just one portion of the building a year or so ago, but wanted to see what you thought of the whole thing. That distortion really bothers me, and I think I'll try what Greg says....just isolate the windows. Appreciate all your input.
John