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  1. 03-01-2008, 01:47 PM #1
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    window shoping

    which one do you prefer, I thought this is cute. please comment anyone..
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  2. 03-01-2008, 01:53 PM #2
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    Re: window shoping

    I like the second one. Not to much glare on the window. What did you do with the bushes??
    Did you stand in them for the second shot??
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  3. 03-01-2008, 01:57 PM #3
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    Re: window shoping

    actually, the first one I was down pretty low to the ground
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    Re: window shoping

    The 2nd one.
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  5. 03-01-2008, 04:58 PM #5
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    Re: window shoping

    2nd one. I think it highlights the woman's face better, plus the bushes aren't there to compete for attention.
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  6. 03-02-2008, 07:38 AM #6
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    Re: window shoping

    Second one.
    His reflection under her shoulder, the lack of light glare so we can see her face, no bushes, overall much better.
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  7. 03-02-2008, 07:57 AM #7
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    Re: window shoping

    I agree #2. It's a keeper for sure. Well spotted. I like the tilted crop. Two thumbs up...
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  8. 03-02-2008, 05:16 PM #8
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    Re: window shoping

    Second one...nice!

    I like that she is looking past him.

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  9. 03-03-2008, 08:54 AM #9
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    Re: window shoping

    Always the contrarian I like the first image (except for the bushes in the foreground). Although the two together really let the viewer in on the story.
    No, I DON'T need that.
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  10. 03-03-2008, 08:58 AM #10
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    Re: window shoping

    Thank you so much for all the reply guy, I like the second one too. I'm so excited they 're geting married this weeken and I can't wait to shoot. will post some wedding photo next week if you guy might like to see some.
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  11. 03-03-2008, 11:54 AM #11
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    Re: window shoping

    The second one.
    Is that all it took? Her looks and his attention and their getting married?! LOL
    Talk about window shopping . . .
    (of course, I'm kiddin)
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  12. 03-03-2008, 12:24 PM #12
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    Re: window shoping

    you are so funny, they are so cute together though.
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