window to the lake

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  • 03-24-2004, 12:12 AM
    hifijohn
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  • 02-27-2008, 01:03 AM
    infidel
    Re: window to the lake
    i think this is rather nice... but it's a bit hard to tell that's a lake there or ocean or. I wonder if it should have been zoomed up a notch more but then that might ruined it.
  • 02-27-2008, 09:52 AM
    gahspidy
    Re: window to the lake
    Good John. i like the color of the front wall against the monotone and murky look of the scene in the window. might be a bit more to offer with a bird in the sky or a baot on the water, but i like what you have here already.
  • 02-27-2008, 10:28 AM
    engineer
    Re: window to the lake
    no matter if lake or ocean or runway, i like it a lot as it is. very nice composition!
  • 02-27-2008, 12:41 PM
    MB1
    Re: window to the lake
    I think the strength of this image is the composition.

    As Gary noted a bird or boat (baot?!?) in the window might be nice but it also might remove some of the mystery.
  • 02-27-2008, 03:13 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: window to the lake
    I also agree another element would help and the composition carries this one. Some slightly cloudy skies would have helped as well.
  • 02-27-2008, 04:41 PM
    GB1
    Re: window to the lake
    Looks like one of those modernistic Scandinavian homes! Interesting scene - simple, elegant, with a touch of ocean. Could be sharper. It might also need something else, perhaps a boat out there.

    G