Whisky stop

[Herriot]

Was taken by the varied patterns, not sure what you will make of it so would welcome any input!

Many thanks
Herriot

[Chunk]

I love the patterns and textures. There's a lot to look at.
I want to get in closer to highlight wher the patterns break down.
If there is not too much other stuff at ground level it might be better to include all of the wheels in the frame and have two complete round shapes amongst all those hard straight lines.

[gahspidy]

I like the grungy, gritty look of the scene. i agree with Chunks comments about bringing the wheels into the scene, and perhaps a bit sharper on the details and textures, however without losing the dreamlike quality you have brought into this.

[jar_e]

As Gary and Chunk pointed out, I think having the wheels would be a huge addition, though I wouldn't want you to lose any of the top if you had to pan down. There is some great texture and contrast here and the tones are just amazing.

Well done.

[Herriot]

Thanks for the comments, I kind of liked the fact that the motorbike was cut in half but I guess the round shapes against the shutters would help.

This was taken from the back of a moving pick up truck as we were driving along, we were stationary at the time but didn't have a lot of time to frame the shot, am going to be revisiting the scene soon!

Thanks again
Herriot