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    what is going on?

    Hi, I'd like to know what you see in this picture, and if it works for you

    Also C&C greatly appreciated!!
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    Re: what is going on?

    looks like the little girl and a baloon string. i think if we could see more of her, like her hand, it would be better. she looks happy though.

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    Re: what is going on?

    I like the spur of the moment feel to it. I like how you were able to capture it. The background however is very distracting. Hard to set shots like this up, but there has to be a way there... maybe from the side where the chair is you could have gotten less other things in the photo.

    But note that catching the moment is better than having everything technically perfect and missing it. I guess the goal of really good photos is to get both perfect.
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    Re: what is going on?

    I agree with GB1, the lamp merging from her chin hurts the photo but what do you do when you are captureing a moment? It's hard to think of composition on the fly...
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