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    Wet Bumblebee on Columbine

    He'd flown through some wet leaves so his fuzz was a little glisteny.
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    Re: Wet Bumblebee on Columbine

    Another selfish bump in hopes of getting a response :P

    I think the focus on Mr. Bumbly Bee may be a little too soft? And that he may be a little too centered?

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    Re: Wet Bumblebee on Columbine

    From here it looks soft. the composition is fine (not too centered). Maybe a high pass filter overlayed might help, or maybe not... The focal plane is odd in this one, it jumps from the bee's wing to the bud exiting the top of the frame, yet excluding any part of the flower the bee is standing on, that bothers me.

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    Re: Wet Bumblebee on Columbine

    I see what you mean about the focal plane.... it's a bit disorientating... hrm...

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