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    Well, it was hot (warning - nudity)

    Ice cream, hot weather and digital camera. Just a ridiculas photo taken with my point-n-shoot...

    Looks a bit like a ~~ mermaid ~~ to me
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    Re: Well, it was hot (warning - nudity)

    Ummmmmmmm GB,,,,I don't know what your are trying to do here...This lady is very easy on the eye..The tonality of her skin tones between her face and behind are very uneven unless she sunbakes with only her butt exposed...I would lighten her body a bit and also darken her face..I love the way her panties hang off her feet..Also clone out the power point on the wall..It shows the limitations of a point and shoot..
    I would try the very same shot on the beach if she is game..

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    Re: Well, it was hot (warning - nudity)

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    Ice cream, hot weather and digital camera. Just a ridiculas photo taken with my point-n-shoot...

    Looks a bit like a ~~ mermaid ~~ to me
    This is the sort of thing that taken with a white seamless background and floor, would be an terrfic "art" photo. The wall outlet and busy carpet resulting from the impromptu nature of the shot takes away from it.

    Lovely lady -- it's nice to see a nude with a real smile.

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    Re: Well, it was hot (warning - nudity)

    Great DOF...

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    Re: Well, it was hot (warning - nudity)

    Jurgen, we had no idea what we was doing either. It's high summer over here, too hot! Just a silly shot.

    I'll have to work more on this shot later, but here's a cut n paste on the sand to get the idea. I think it would look great. There's a secluded beach that might work for that...

    Same with the white bckgd, Lava, I would love to have that setup here - endless possibilities. I'm a little cramped for space, but maybe! Here's another cut n paste.

    I sharpened it a little Greg, but the aim-and-shooter didnt do that bad this time. Here's another shot up close.

    She says she's part Portuguese, you can sort of tell,

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    Re: Well, it was hot (warning - nudity)

    The original photo looked better as the carpet colour blends well with the girl's complexion but definitely not the wall and the electric socket although they are irrelevant. Good shot and composition.

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