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    We'll Get Out Of Here Somehow

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    Re: We'll Get Out Of Here Somehow

    I wish the twig wasn't in front of the monkey's eye. Also, there is too much space between the two monkeys, and my focus just jumps between the two... neither holds a lot of interest for me.
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    Re: We'll Get Out Of Here Somehow

    Very cool. Yeah it would be better without the twig there, but it is hard to get monkeys to pose. Although this monkey will do it for a fee.

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    Re: We'll Get Out Of Here Somehow

    Yeap that branch does not aid at all being in front of the focal subject in the composition.

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    Re: We'll Get Out Of Here Somehow

    Ok guys, here's two more w/o blockage, though not quite as good imo, but you tell me.

    These remind me of little munchens (sp?) or something.

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    Re: We'll Get Out Of Here Somehow

    I would have made two photos out of it. The guy on the right is in a very dynamic pose.
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    Re: We'll Get Out Of Here Somehow

    Ok Don, I see where you're going. I sort of like the interaction between the two though, you can tell they're social critters so to me one seems odd. The super edited look you created doesn't do it for me, personally, but it's fine as an expt.

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    Re: We'll Get Out Of Here Somehow

    I see where you are going GB with the matter of the interaction. Unfortunately I think this is a bit lost due to distance between subjects or the angle of the pic. I know is not going to help much but anyhow...I like the little guy expression from the third and the big guy of the second shot.

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