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    We Got Him Surrounded

    From last year. I don't know if I posted this in the sports thread last year or not....but they don't pay much attention to anything that isn't bikes, cars, or high school sports. I'd like you guys to take a crack at it.;) It certainly can't be worse than the last two I posted.
    Sorry about the border payn.

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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    Hi John,

    This is an interesting shot. I like the varying expressions on these guys while they take a break in the action. I am drawn to the surrounded player who is bending over to catch his breath, I suppose he's the runner. But I think the man in the very back whom we really can't see may be checking him out!
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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    Now that you mention it........;)

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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    but they don't pay much attention to anything that isn't bikes, cars, or high school sports.
    Huh, that's what most of "them" shoot that's why !
    I'd be quite happy - and encourage some sports or actions shots without balls, or wheels.

    But if it's critique you're after, this is the right place

    So, is the guy hiding at the back checking out the other guy's butt, or not?
    PAul

    Scroll down to the Sports Forum and post your sports pictures !

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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    LOL! This border doesn't bother me, it's the "artistic" borders.

    It seems ok. I don't know anything about sports, but wouldn't they be more effective spread out over the play area? As for the butt checking theory....you shoulda guessed CLKunst woulda seen that! I knew I wasn't the one with the gutter brain!

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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    Quote Originally Posted by SmartWombat
    So, is the guy hiding at the back checking out the other guy's butt, or not?
    Paul, only he knows for sure ;) John

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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    Quote Originally Posted by payn817
    LOL! This border doesn't bother me, it's the "artistic" borders.

    It seems ok. I don't know anything about sports, but wouldn't they be more effective spread out over the play area? As for the butt checking theory....you shoulda guessed CLKunst woulda seen that! I knew I wasn't the one with the gutter brain!
    Got it, payn........no 'artistic' borders. :-)There was a lull in the action, and the infielders all gathered around second base, where the runner happened to be. (It's what they do) John

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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    Damn, he must be fast he's run his feet off :-))

    My only critique is the lack of feet - other than that I like the shot.

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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    Quote Originally Posted by readingr
    Damn, he must be fast he's run his feet off :-))

    My only critique is the lack of feet - other than that I like the shot.

    Roger
    Yeah, I'll eventually post one that everyone likes.

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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    Quote Originally Posted by swmdrayfan
    Yeah, I'll eventually post one that everyone likes.

    I think we all sometimes feel that way. Don't let it get you down or anything. Sometimes, you have to just decide for yourself, and ignore the critique. If you wanna see crap, look at my past three days worth... that's crap! We all tend to pick each other's work apart, but non-photographers, including designers, etc. like the stuff we often think doesn't work. Part of the problem is simply not knowing the photographer's intent.

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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    Quote Originally Posted by payn817
    you shoulda guessed CLKunst woulda seen that! I knew I wasn't the one with the gutter brain!
    HEY!!! I resemble that remark. . . .
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    Re: We Got Him Surrounded

    Quote Originally Posted by payn817
    I think we all sometimes feel that way. Don't let it get you down or anything. Sometimes, you have to just decide for yourself, and ignore the critique. If you wanna see crap, look at my past three days worth... that's crap! We all tend to pick each other's work apart, but non-photographers, including designers, etc. like the stuff we often think doesn't work. Part of the problem is simply not knowing the photographer's intent.
    Aww, I'm just in a slump I think. Of course, it would help a great deal if I would look at the whole picture to make sure everyones feet are there.

    Thanks for the comments guys.

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