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    water trickle

    A small stream up on the mountain. ..HDR
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    Re: water trickle

    The colours are pretty good here - a nice impression of moss and iron in the stone. The HDR seems to have served you well here. I find the twig thing on the left a little distracting and the image seems a little geared to the right. Maybe a different crop? Having said that, I know how hard it is to do shots like this without keeping extraneous details at bay.

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    Re: water trickle

    J - This one doesn't seem to have the central theme that the others do. I think the foreground blur at this foreshortened angle just didn't work. Was worth a try though.

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    Re: water trickle

    This was experimental for me...I finally took the time to set up a tripod and remember to take some extra exposures for hdr. I wasnt thrilled either. Thx for your comments.

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    Re: water trickle

    I like the concept behind it, maybe a different vantage point like positioning the camera lower and looking up the stream more could have centered the weight for the picture?

    also, the color/contrast seems almost a harsh contrast from the water. can you do something like a light lens blur in photoshop to make the photo a little smoother and not jumpy between the textures? I like the lighting and picture a lot though. It has a real nice scenery shot potential.

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