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Thread: Water Show

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    Water Show

    Playing with DoF at one of the downtown Bremerton fountains.


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    I wonder if a certain edit I did was too obvious? Also is the bright spot on the left too distracting?
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    Re: Water Show

    I like the bright spot on the left but would crop the last person off the right to get just those sharp lines of water into the image.

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    Re: Water Show

    Yuck....in addition to MB's suggestion, I also see the need for a little vertical straightening. Great shot though.
    John

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