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To be brutally honest, it isn't anything special. Much of the image seems under exposed, and the subject is not very interesting. I would guess that you took this one on a whim while sitting on the bus, and there is nothing wrong with that. But, perhaps you should be more selective of the photos you upload for serious critique.
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I'm thinking you could split this into 2 fairly interesting abstracts to be displayed side by side. I'm thinking a vertical cut right down the middle of the puddle/crater in the exact center of the frame.
As a whole the image seems a bit over processed, almost grainy and with too wide a tonal range.
Hey Don, don't get me wrong, you are a bigger part of the community than I am by far - I just noticed that many of your photos are taken on a whim, no real potential impact in mind. Maybe that is just your style though, I do not want you to think I was trying to sound condescending (reread my post and it could have been worded in a better way).
I meant over exposed btw... but that is just the water reflecting light back - making the image much brighter.
Feel free to edit and post any of my photos as part of your critique.