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In shot 2, it looks like there's camera blur in addition to the motion blur. I'd like it a lot more if the background was sharper.
In shot 3, I don't like the amount of contrast you've put in here. I know it was probably the effect you were going for, though.
Shot 4, I think this would do better as a straight on instead of at an angle.
Shot 5, I like this, but watch the reflections in the windows. Maybe you could carefully darken the top half of the right pane to match the lower half. Looks like it needs some rotation and curve adjustment. This is my favorite of the bunch.
Don that first one is terrific. and I like the third a lot.
Roger
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