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    A Wall And A Window - Two Versions

    Trying this out in two versions. C & C welcome. I know this looks tilted, but the building is settling.
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    Re: A Wall And A Window - Two Versions

    Not sure why but I do like version 1 better.
    The problem with the lean is that there is no way to tell its a building settling without your written input. I'd straighten it.
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    Re: A Wall And A Window - Two Versions

    I like the first with the space on the right. I think it needs sharpened and skew the top and bottom right to level the brick work. Leans are easily fixed. Nice find.
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    Re: A Wall And A Window - Two Versions

    I agree that #1 is more appealing. As Greg said, the space on the right helps and the shadow there adds another interesting element.
    It's a good subject and I like the composition of your first shot.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: A Wall And A Window - Two Versions

    Thanks, guys. I'll work on that lean.
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    Re: A Wall And A Window - Two Versions

    Corrected version. I think this takes care of the lean.
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