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Looks like an old 60s photo! Did you just take it? Very unusual. I wish she wasnt so centered. Perhapps you could crop out some of the left (but that might clip off the nose of the bus. Maybe that's OK though).
Try some more color schemes btw. A sepia might be better.
GB
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Looks like an old 60s photo! Did you just take it? Very unusual. I wish she wasnt so centered. Perhapps you could crop out some of the left (but that might clip off the nose of the bus. Maybe that's OK though).
Try some more color schemes btw. A sepia might be better.
GB
Thanks for your input GB...
I took that picture last 4th. of July and the walking person is my wife Sarah.
Thanks again.
I like the "color scheme", if that's the right way to say it, but not the way her dress blends in with the sidewalk. Not sure what coulda/shoulda been done, but I generally prefer more detail... but that's just me, I guess.
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Certainly has a retro look and feel but wish there was more tonal separation, especially in the highlights. Was their detail lost in post processing? I am not as bothered by the woman being centered because the bus adds enough counter balance to the image, (not sure if that is a correct term).