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    Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    Taken from a bus after finishing the Kilimanjaro climb. Very typical scene around that area. I wish it was a little sharper, but you tell me :skep:

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    Re: Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    Its my favorite so far. I just wish the bus had crossed a bit earlier so that she was down by the curve of the path.
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    Re: Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    Great shot, I am loving the colors of the clothing, adds so much to the shots. Makes me thankful all I have to do is go to the sink....

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    Re: Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    not sure what the original looks like, but I think it would be nice to add more depth by keeping in more of the background... also possibly try cropping the right side past that foreground plant?

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    Re: Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    GB1 excellent, I'd probably crop off the right a bit to put the person off center, probably try to the edge of the leaf of the first plant or maybe not, it's a great shot...
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    Re: Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    Nice work GB. I agree with the others on a slight crop of the right side, but only a nit pick. A very fine picture.
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    Re: Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    Frog - Thks. We didn't quite get there that early, but I did get several other shots beforehand. I really think this one is the best though.

    I would have hung around for another walker to come by, but the bus split. One thing that sorta bugged me on this trip overall was the lack of freedom that I am used to when I'm driving and can stop my car anywhere for as long as I want and take pix...... Just couldn't do that on such a guided tour. I feel that I missed twice as many shots as I got :cryin: But I think if I travel more often, I'll learn tricks to handle these situations.

    Lori - Thanks too. I saw so many people walking in Tanzania. I guess that many of the families there don't own cars. Or perhaps they do, but can't afford the gas! I think someone calculated it to be between $6 and $8 a gallon. In Tanzania, that's more than a lot! But the advantage is that it seems to keep them in very good shape. The porters going up the side of Kili were tough mountain goats alright..

    Caleb - I did do some cropping. She was just too small in the frame. Here is the original. I think it might be great very large .. But it isn't really sharp enough I don't think. Not sure what I did wrong on this one.

    Shootme, Greg - OK, I can see what you mean. Here's a crop. This one is difficult to edit because so much is interesting, her and the surroundings. Like I mentioned above, would have been wonderful as a large print 'cept for the sharpness issue.

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    Re: Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    I like the one on the left. I agree that the surroundings are interesting, but they are not really the subject for the shot and they still work for a great composition in the one on the left, well done.
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    Re: Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    I like the cropped version as per the suggestions given. I alos like the full vertical shot, but would like to see it with the same color balance as the tighter crop image.
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    Re: Walking Down a Path in Tanzania ...

    I like the second version better but she appears to be leaning left. Very good work GB.
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