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    Re: walking

    This is probably my favorite of your seria.

    Very cool, perhaps a slightly faster shutter speed would work, you're(?) a bit too blurry for my tastes (personal preference) I do like the blur, I think 1 increment faster would help though.
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    Re: walking

    I think your triptych works well. I like just the hint of people walking by.

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    Re: walking

    Brilliant Seb. The barely visible walkers are very subtle and clever. It's also somewhat beautiful to look at also because the pastely colours work so well together.
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    Re: walking

    Well done Seb, I like everything about it. The lighting is good, great exposure and brilliant idea. I also like Mr. Hip Hop on the wall...
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    Re: walking

    Seb, nice work. As Tom said, the colors are very pleasing to look at. the idea of the blurred person walking by is interesting. Also, glad to see you have framed and hung Mr Hip Hop. Great creativity coming out of you. . . .
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    Re: walking

    Thanks guys,

    Mr Yuck: I might try similar shots with a faster shutter speed later. Thanks for your suggestion.

    Jim: Thanks!

    Tom: I was somewhat surprised by the way the colors came out. Post-processing was kept very simple and no color edition was performed but somehow, the colors wasn't exactly like that for real. Thanks.

    Greg: Actually, that's Mr. "make it funky" but I am glad that you noticed that element. I liked the idea of a picture inside a picture...

    Gary: Thanks!

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    Re: walking

    I like the juxtaposition of the three pictures.

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    Re: walking

    Innovative. I like the blurred figure. Sort of ghostly looking. Maybe B&W would work as well.

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    Re: walking

    Quote Originally Posted by Greg McCary
    Well done Seb, I like everything about it. The lighting is good, great exposure and brilliant idea. I also like Mr. Hip Hop on the wall...
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    +1 I dont know how I missed that

    Another suggestion, print out this and frame it, then put it on the wall where mr hip hop is, for one frame, and leave mr hip hop for another, and for another, replace hip hop with that other series. (though that involves considerably more work...just a thought)
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    Re: walking

    Has he lost is mind: Thanks!

    Stefeb: Thanks. I'll experiment with that later on.

    Mr Yuck: lol. I like that idea! That would be neat. I am running low on inks but stay tuned. I'll do that print.

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