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    A Walk In The Prarie

    A quick grab shot from a weekend walk. The more I look at it, the more I like it. Just wondering what others thought.
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    Re: A Walk In The Prarie

    the blue sky looks a little too 'digital', the density doesn't look right and has an unpleasant, dark gradient. a little too, cyan, or something too. The detail on the bottom doesn't really do anything for me either, and the fine lined details is a little messy.
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    Re: A Walk In The Prarie

    Thank you very much for the honest feedback!
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    Re: A Walk In The Prarie

    The ground also looks a little dark.

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    Re: A Walk In The Prarie

    I actually like it as is. I don't see it as a landscape, more as a work of art.

    great composition. nice contrasty colours in the green/yellow vs. blue/white up top. also nice contrast in texture, the rough below and the smooth above. the placement of the clouds are great. also love the twigs sticking out from the bottom. very balanced. the predominant twigs that stick out out of the ground have some nice help from those clouds that take their line from there and project it to the top left of the photo.

    i like it.
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