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    newb to all things photography gjhsu's Avatar
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    Walk in the park

    Took these a few weeks ago, still working on technique and whatnot, feel free to share your thoughts:





    Any tips on what to crop? All of those are original proportion only because I don't really know what would make them better

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    I think I would actually zoom out on the first photo... What is on the other side of the river?
    The second photo I would crop down to the front bench only.
    The third photo, I can't say I would change it much... Maybe have the person a little more out of focus. Nice shot.

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    I agree with the first two. I'd actually like to see the guy in focus in the third. I'd zoom in and try to make his face readable. What's he thinking? Why's he walking alone? Some faces are full of character.
    Steve Braunlich
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