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There isn't anything to the left ;) just blackness. The building in the background ends there and nothing but a pitch black see was after that, in fact I cropped a bit off the left because it was dead space. Thanks kisu
Liban
"There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela
The guy facing left looks like he has been decapitated is there enough detail in orgional image to recover his head. Interesting how the people look isolated in their own little worlds. Nice
Pete
Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...
I think the main thing here Leles is that you left it a bit late in the evening when it all became a bit too dark. Other than that it is not too bads with the Melacon wall leading us in nicely.
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
Hey Liban, I think this is the first night scene from you that I can say does not work for me. Always a first. . .
I agree with Tom in that it is very dark and we lose much of the scene about. I'm bothered by the waiting man being near the edge of frame looking out the edge. Looking at him makes me want to look out as well and I have to force myslef to visit the other third of the image. When I do, there is nothing there to view. I think getting closer to him so that his head would be up over the lights in the background would help set him off and lining it up so he is in the left portion of the photo looking into and out. I believe your intent was to have the concrete pier edge leading up which works but not enough to make the image.
hminx, lol. yeah that guy, i shot it in raw so it won't be hard to get his head back ;) Thanks
Tom, yeah, I was so addicted to shooting at twilight/blue hour that I forced myself to shoot at different times this time around. I was getting a tiny bit overloaded with vivid blue skies. but i totally agree with you. thanks
Greg, yeah, i see that person now. him being gone would definitely define the subject a bit more. thank you.
Gary, thanks for pointing out all the flaws, appreciated as always. i agree this one isn't all that lol.
Thanks guys
Liban
"There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela
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