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Have you considered converting the first one to black & white, changing it into a study of shape and form, light and shadows, points and lines, textures and contrast?
as a black and white photo it has alot of compositional strength, but personally I believe the color benefits the photo in a way that it cant do without
I think the sun's blowing out the bottom two shots. In addition a good cropping out of the peoples cut off heads and bodies could improve the last one. These bottom two really would have been very good, IMO, if you'd got them at the same time as #2.
John
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