Valleyfair

[EBAR]

This photo was taken at Valleyfair Amusement Park in Shakopee, MN.

[Charles Hess]

You've got a very pleasant scene(could be posted larger to better appreciate) that would look good as part of a photo essay of this location. The frame is extremely busy, though, and I found myself unable to settle my eyes in on a central subject. Closer views of any number of objects found here would make for interesting photos.

[Addies Granddaddy]

Definately, larger would be better. That piece of the umbrella on the left doesn't add anything to the shot and should be cloned or cropped out. I like what you're doing with this though. As Charles suggested, it would be good as part of a series.
John