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    used styrofoam cup

    just a quick one took the other day. what drew me to the cup in the first place was all the dried stains from when I spilled it all over my car. needless to say my car now smells like one big dunkachino.

    thanks, stew
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    i agree with nat....

    ..on every point she made, ESPECIALLY the one about cleaning that spilled dunkaccino. trust me, nothing, and i mean nothing, smells worse than old dunkaccino crusted over on the floor of a hot car. definately clean the car very well. unless you love to vomit. oh yeah, and by the way, nice shot. definately try a tighter crop though, and keep shooting and posting. (something i never do, but enjoy looking at others' posts). later.
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    dunkachino

    I am partial to "interesting" shots like yours, si I like it with a few nitpiks and sugestions...The stains make the top of the cup look like a watercolor--done in sepia. Great texture and pattern--- Have you tried cropping in tighter to make it more of an abstract? I feel there's a lot of emopty space to cut out and maybe even try it as a bw for fun...

    STEAM CLEAN your car as quickly as possible...Dunkachinos don't just come out from blotting and basic cleaning...come summer your car will cook up the residue left in your carpeting and seat fabric and it it'll wreak of spoiled milk by the wend of the weekedn of the first hot day
    (my husband is a drinker and spiller, I know)

    anyway good eye for catching the unexpected
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    nice job

    nice job on it! i may still play around and post another one for fun.

    and by the way, thanks to both of you i am DEFINITELY getting it steam cleaned. i am basically a lazy individual and so i probably would have ignored it. right now the cold of Boston has effectively frozen it, but it never lets me forget its there.

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