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    Urban Teepee

    from the bus. 55-200 mm Nikkor
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    Re: Urban Teepee

    Don - Sorry, but there's not much good I could say about this shot.. the subject is so blocked by the trees/bushes/pole, and it is not sharp, etc. Did you really think it's a keeper? The problem here is that you shot it from a moving bus.. You did not put yourself in the position to capture a properly-composed, sharp image of a potentially interesting subject. You need to get off the bus and concentrate on your subjects. Maybe the fact that you shot it from the bus is becoming the subject here, sort of a photojournalistic thing....

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    Re: Urban Teepee

    Well it's both convenient and fun. I sometimes get good shots this way. The photo reminds me of the Garden of Eden.

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    Re: Urban Teepee

    Quote Originally Posted by Don Schaeffer
    Well it's both convenient and fun. I sometimes get good shots this way. The photo reminds me of the Garden of Eden.
    I can see it being fun, and like I mentioned, possibly photo-journalistic. Discrimination might be in order here though.. i think this one probably has too many issues to be warrant serious consideration. Just my opin

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    Re: Urban Teepee

    I like the composition and subject well enough but your color balance and exposure seem way off. I doubt that the sky was that color and the whole image seems murky.......
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Urban Teepee

    it's dead!
    and slumps down on the ground blood oozing from its chest.

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    Re: Urban Teepee

    Quote Originally Posted by Don Schaeffer
    it's dead!
    and slumps down on the ground blood oozing from its chest.
    LOL! :thumbsup:
    No, I DON'T need that.

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