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    Untitled

    I think the left side might be too bright. Any feedback appreciated.
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    Re: Untitled

    Very nice. I would like the interior under the bright roof to show up some more..maybe some sharpening tool just in that area. You need those levels to keep the far right visible. My .02c.
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    Re: Untitled

    The left side does look a bit bright. I think just a slight crop would do it. Look nice and clean !

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    Re: Untitled

    For me I would leave the crop tool aside. I like it the way it is, the only things that I would correct is what others pointed already about the highlights under the long roof and some slight sharpening.
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    Re: Untitled

    It's just borderliine too bright, IMHO. I think it would be enough if you were to just tone down that bright white square inside those 3 tall support poles.
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    Re: Untitled

    While the left side may be very slightly bright, I think that same brightness forces one to concentrate on the main subject. It suits my taste, so I would leave it alone.
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    Re: Untitled

    I guess I’m going to be the contrarian - I think the left side is fine. It's wandering over to the right side and getting lost trying to figure out what that tower and sphere thing are that bothers me. – TF
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    Re: Untitled

    Great composition on this one. I like it all, though the person on the walkway bugs me a bit, would have liked to see him/her much more to the left of the shot, near where the crosses are.
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    Re: Untitled

    Thanks all All suggestions are noted.
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