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    United - another idea

    Hi all .. another idea ....

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    Re: United - another idea

    nice! if this doesn't get the "unity" point through, I dont know what will.

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    Re: United - another idea

    Not as much a see and react type shot. May be acceptable with only a few words to read and less of a 'mug shot' view.

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    Re: United - another idea

    Another, simpler version.

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    Re: United - another idea

    Certainly an easier to look at version of this.

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    Re: United - another idea

    Mike the second version is much better to view. The first is a tad busy.

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    Re: United - another idea

    I think they both work but I like the angle of the second on better. Nice work
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    Re: United - another idea

    Definately the second one

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    Re: United - another idea

    Great idea but I see several problems with the first image;

    #1 Scrabble always starts in the starred pink square.
    #2 It is a busy image.
    #3 The straight lines of the board are distorted in the image and just look wrong.

    I much prefer your second image. It is simpler, the point of view is interesting and it still has the same great ideas and sentiment as the first image.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: United - another idea

    neat idea love to see it on the front of a book!
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