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    Unidentified Butterfly and Rock

    I photographed this butterfly with a D70 and Tamron 90mm macro set at f/11 and 1/125. It's cropped and photoshopped a little. Do you like it? How would you improve it?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lava Lamp
    I photographed this butterfly with a D70 and Tamron 90mm macro set at f/11 and 1/125. It's cropped and photoshopped a little. Do you like it? How would you improve it?
    Personaly I like this as is. It looks as though it is hanging on the edge of a cliff.

    Where did you shoot it?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lava Lamp
    I photographed this butterfly with a D70 and Tamron 90mm macro set at f/11 and 1/125. It's cropped and photoshopped a little. Do you like it? How would you improve it?
    Your attention to deatila lways amazes me...thanks for taking pics just for me
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    anyways...i like the detail and feel. Good textures(although a bit of burning in in the rock to really bring out the roughness vs the velevty look of the butterfly and there is a way too blurred soft spot below the butterfly---you've lost detail in a few spots on the rock..).... composition/DOF-- I like...lighting is beautiful...two small visual nitpicks---the upper left corner has a blue and whitish spot...and I wonder if you have a shot where the antennae isn't directly in line with the edge of the rock (it makes it look like a one antennae butterfly) and maybe sharpen the single antennae a bit to bring it out of the background)

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    Love it- I like the use of space here. My only nitpick is that antennae gets a tad lost against the rock.
    Your portrayal of butterflies is amazing- they look so huge and accessible, like you can walk over at touch it- when it is very hard to even get within a foot of one usually without it fluttering off.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lava Lamp
    I photographed this butterfly with a D70 and Tamron 90mm macro set at f/11 and 1/125. It's cropped and photoshopped a little. Do you like it? How would you improve it?
    I like the composition and the colors are very nice. I would maybe have used a tad more DOF to get the whole wings tack sharp (or maybe it's just a result of the file compression).

    It looks like the butterfly is hanging on a gem or a piece of quartz! The rock is a bit over-exposed... maybe a bit of burning in PS?

    Otherwise, I will have to have a look at your other posting. I am looking for a macro lens for my Nikon system! I like what I see.

    Cheers.

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