Two's Company, Three's A Crowd

[Overbeyond]

Not often I stick two shots up for critique on the same day but with a bit of time on my hands I got a bit busy. How do you feel about this one?
With this type of shot I often worry how it is seen on other peoples monitors as mine is still in its virgin state (uncalibrated) and its an flat panel which can cause a lot of problems.
Tom