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    Two shots, need help.

    Hey all, new here and to photography..Just wanted to get some feedback on these photos. Where could improvment be made? Thanks
    Last edited by Ainokea; 04-22-2011 at 03:21 PM.

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    Re: Post office jam

    Nice, it is almost like 2 shots in one

    1. the building being seen from behind a bush , nice mood that matches the b&w
    2. an the biker frozen up in the air, just wish we could see the face, and that it was in color

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    Re: Two shots, need help.

    Thanks, I actully really like the BW vs the color one. Might post the color up in a bit though.

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    Re: Two shots, need help.

    Yes for the second, just see the face dude

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    Re: Two shots, need help.

    I really like the 2nd shot ...however, one quick idea ...make sure the top of the photo does not turn completely white or burned out ...all of the sky needs to have some level of tonality in it - try messing with the levels adjustment.

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    Re: Two shots, need help.

    Alright got it, how is this?

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    Re: Two shots, need help.

    Much better. One more idea ...try adding some vignette around the edges so the the eye is drawn toward to center - tree ....

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