Twin Profiles

[Alison]

I took this photograph back in May and have never been too sure about it.
I would love to know what everyone here thinks of it.
TIA

Info:
Window light only
50mm 1.8 lens
Manual Mode
ISO 400
F/7.1
SS 1/125

[CLKunst]

Ali,

My first thoughts are "Awesome I wondered when you were going to try this." Followed immediately by "Awww. . .too bad about the jacket." I think the zipper and collar of (forgive me) Lisa's (?) jacket intrudes too much on (again forgive me) Jenny's lips. {I've probably got them switched. They do have distinct differences in their facial features but not much and I'm just muddy and dyslexic mostly anyway. }
Other than that this is a great concept. If you shoot it again match their clothes colors, stay away from high collars, and please post it so I can see!!!

Best,

[Alison]

Thank you so much.
Yes you have them the right way round
And I wondered if anyone would say anything about the collar and zip.
I found that a bit distracting too but Lisa was having an off day and didn't really want to perform for me. So it was basically "what I am wearing or no photo at all".
Ho hum. I'd love to re-shoot it but I have to choose my moments.