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I like it. The sun coming through your glasses is great. I think you could have done without the leaves on the left or the roof on the right. Is this an HDR? It looks soft. Also tilting right.
I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..
Thanks Greg. I do agree with both the leaves and the stairs on the right. I left the leaves, because I thought another foreground element would help a bit. But it would be better if there were either more leaves or none. The stairs were mostly because I just was too lazy to move some stuff on the patio to frame it better.
Not technically HDR. I think there is just a hint of tone mapping on the face and in the shirt, but most of it is just blending two exposures. Not what most people think about when they say HDR, but it is still basically the same thing just done by hand.
I think the second one wants a much tighter crop. Probably should clean up whatever circle artifact that is in the sky. Sometimes Canon sensors put odd dark circles in the sky. Used to happen on my old rebel too. Not sure why...
Errr... not sure what you're doing here Daq. Is this in Tucson? If so, where's the Seguaro to identify the area? The warmth in good in the second posting, but .. I guess I'm not getting it
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