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    Turn of the Century

    now a small office building
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    Re: Turn of the Century

    Nice building. I'd like to see an image of it early in the morning or later in the day when the light isn't so harsh.

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    Re: Turn of the Century

    good point Jim

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    Re: Turn of the Century

    don't go too overboard with the PP. the blur of the surrounding buildings is obviously faked. it's a good angle and a good subject, just shoot it at a different time of day, and do something to minimize the surrounding buldings, whether it be burning or whatnot, just don't fake that DOF so much.

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    Re: Turn of the Century

    Thanks Brent

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    Re: Turn of the Century

    Cool house. Yes, it needs to be shot at a different time of day.

    Watch 'blowing out', overexposing, the wall on the left.

    It could be a great scene with the shadows from the fence falling into the yard.

    There's some keystoning going on here that should be easy enought to prevent when you reshoot.

    Good subject!!
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