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Ahhhh, tuna, just when I think you are the cake with b&w you come up with this. Love the colors for the building wall; really helps the tree stand out even more. At first glance, I was not sure if I liked it with the tree cut off on the top and side. But the more I look at it, I think this reall works for.
On a different note, what film, if any, do you use for b&w? Just curious since your work in that always seems to be top notch.
Beautifully simple Tuna with great contrasts but compositionally this one doesn't do it for me. I think it needs a little extra ; perhaps one of us?
Tom
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I agree with the composition issue. Beautiful colors and silhouette. But I want to see the left edge of the tree, preferably with as much space to the left as exists to the right. I think that's all this photo needs.
Rick
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I like it too, I think the balance is given by the windows making it not need the extra space on the left. I like the counter balance of the tree and windows, which is odd for me as I am a very symmetrical person, in photography and even in my home decoration. But this one works for me, the colors are outstanding!
Hmm! is it me, the only complaint I have is the black rectangle at the base of the tree which my eyes keep getting drawn to. I assume its a drain hole. Clone that out and I'm happy, Love the colours on this.
Roger.
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Love the colors for the building wall; really helps the tree stand out even more. At first glance, I was not sure if I liked it with the tree cut off on the top and side. But the more I look at it, I think this reall works for.
