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Thread: Train Car

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    Train Car

    Took this yesterday at the Southern Railway Museum, Duluth, GA.

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    Re: Train Car

    decent job with the hdr, but I'd like to see more pop in the colors. I don't think the scene is quite strong enough to stand alone as the subject though.
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    Re: Train Car

    Not crazy about the inclusion of the diesel generation commuter train in the side window, it looks out of place. While the color is probably accurate, I agree w/ n8 that it could be punched up a bit to add some drama.

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    Re: Train Car

    it has an HDR look - ie : kind of hazy

    I would have used a composition looking down the side corridor and included the table / seat / window

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    Re: Train Car

    Not a bad shot at all. Sharpen it a bit and you have a good one.
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