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Thread: On The Tracks

  1. 01-22-2007, 02:27 PM #1
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    On The Tracks

    i went out shooting with HasHeLostHisMind and got a bunch on photos of this corroding building by the railroads. i have tried to look up what it is, but i have found nothing. its in Broomfield, Colorado. more to come.
    I don't want it, I just need it...to breath ...to feel ...to know I'm alive.
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  2. 01-22-2007, 06:25 PM #2
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    Re: On The Tracks

    Quote Originally Posted by afdlips
    ... i have tried to look up what it is, but i have found nothing...
    Is it not some sort of grain elevator?
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  3. 01-22-2007, 06:39 PM #3
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    Re: On The Tracks

    i guess so...i just dont know its history or anything
    I don't want it, I just need it...to breath ...to feel ...to know I'm alive.
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    Re: On The Tracks

    afdlips

    This looks like its had some post processing and the selection is not exactly working for you here. You can see the halo around the building where you darkened the sky.

    You have some strange patterns on the main front of the bulding on the left side Moir effect I think they call it. It doesn't look like a corroding building because of the blue hue all over the picture.

    Try a more realistic approach to see the rust...

    It also looks a little cramped for me and doesn't give the run down feeling.

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  5. 01-23-2007, 04:29 AM #5
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    Re: On The Tracks

    I agree with Rodger. B&W might have been a better choice to me...
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