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    tracking into fall.

    Was out looking for ops this afternoon and remembered this place when I was in the area.
    Little used tracks and hoped I could find a curve into fall folliage. Not sure if it works though.
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    Re: tracking into fall.

    I like the concept. Don't know if from resizing or just all the foliage but the foliage does look a little soft. I think I would have maybe taken 1 or 2 steps to the right of the frame and lowered the tripod (if using one) or went down on my knees to take the shot.

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    Re: tracking into fall.

    Frog, I really like the composition of the shot. It looks as if the track just disappear into the trees. The colors a good as well. I do agree it looks out of focus.
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    Re: tracking into fall.

    Yeah I think the trees especially look soft because it was quite breezy...don't know why else they would be.
    The more I look at it I'm thinking I could have taken a couple or three steps right, too.
    Thanks for the feedback Ray and Greg.
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    Re: tracking into fall.

    Frog,

    As the others have said I do like the concepts but I was thinking of the same critique too.

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