Track Machine

[Don Schaeffer]

[GB1]

Don - I appreciate the shot for what it is. I sort of like shots of factory areas and such. However, there's a ton of distractions in the photo that I'm not sure add to the shot... The pallets, the factory, even the trash on the grass. To me it sort of shows how man polutes the environment though.

You have some serious artifacts on the compressed image here. Look at the suberstructures etc and you can see them. Since your file is only ~ 55k, I presume you really compressed it. I think you went to far on this one. Try using a bit less compression.

GB

[MB1]

I'm liking what you have got here and I think it is worth working on but.......

I am not sure if there is too much foreground or not enough but I'm thinking the foreground isn't right. Plus I want to rotate the image until the roof of the shack next to the track is horizontal. Finally I want to give into my urge to crop and take about 10% off the left.

[Don Schaeffer]

Thanks for your suggestions. Just to tell you this is a crop of a much larger image.