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Nope. Too contrasty, nasty background, looks a bit oversaturated and a bit dark. Plus it feels like the whole thing is leaning to the viewers left.
OTOH it is an idea that you could spend a lot time fooling with.
I'm thinking just shoot one or 2 toys at a time and put a sheet of colored paper (or a grey card) behind them to improve the background and to reduce the tonal range.
This is a subject matter I like playing with. I think the trick is to find them in interesting positions. These look like they are in a police line-up. I think the wooden soldier on the right is the bank robber!
Jim B.
Too bad all the people who know how to run this country are busy running taxicabs or cutting hair.
It's a grab shot while I was walking in Value Village (the Canadian Diabetes store). The lighting was crap but it added to a kind of grim atmosphere. I did some processing on it to eliminate something behind the toys.
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