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    Top of the Mountain...

    i took a hike two days ago to the top of stone mountain and took this pic.

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    I felt like the jooger in the picture was ruining the image. what do you guys think?

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    Re: Top of the Mountain...

    The composition of the cropped version would be interesting if:

    1) The sun was not so monstrous and blown out
    2) The sky had more dramatic clouds/colors
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    Re: Top of the Mountain...

    Quote Originally Posted by DrRoebuck
    The composition of the cropped version would be interesting if:

    1) The sun was not so monstrous and blown out
    2) The sky had more dramatic clouds/colors
    it would look better but since the clouds and colors were not available I tried going with the bright sun and the dark image of the tree.
    Do you guys think that the person in the original makes the shot look less attractive?

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    Re: Top of the Mountain...

    makes it more attractive imho
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    Re: Top of the Mountain...

    Yeah, I like the person in the image ... gives it something extra.
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    Re: Top of the Mountain...

    i dont agree with the clouds comment. I like this as it is. It gives more attention to the tree and the sun. I like the people element of the photo, but just wish i could tell what they are doing...the one on the right kind of looks like a backpacker? I wish their silhouettes were more complete, and you could see their legs.

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    Re: Top of the Mountain...

    thanx for the comments guys... i think the other person was hiking....

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    Re: Top of the Mountain...

    Im not too keen on the people in the image, if you hadnt said what they where I would be wondering and unable to figure it out. to me, and I have been told i have an "odd" mind, it looks like a monster with his erm, manhood out, stalking a hiker.
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