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    Tomatoes

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    Re: Tomatoes

    Beautiful color. The tomatoes looks very delicious. The exposure is very good and I like the range between high and low spots. The dark area on the far right is just the perfect amount in my opinion.

    Several things strike me as potential improvements. The DOF is just a little too shallow imho, as it's drawing my eye to middle tomatos without any reason, and you can see that even those aren't very sharp (the beads of water are soft). The foreground tomato is a little too bright and that causes the viewer's eye to move there (brighter areas do that), but it's not the focus of the image. I don't particularly like the table on the far left: I would crop most of it out even at the expense of clipping off the side of the bowl, which I think will add an artistic flair. Finally, not sure if those imperfections should be showing on the tomatoes? Depends what you're shooting for: some people may choose to fix them.

    Anyway - welcome to the boards.

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