title suggestion ?

[armando_m]

This was shot yesterday , it was a chore to finally agree on a time to go to this place, and 5 mins into it rain started, I got worried about stuff getting wet, cloths and equipment, then I made the mistake of shooting at to low a speed, then thunders started and I called it off

Still managed to get this shot ...

We were driving one car, she a friend and me, still she changed into dry cloths without getting undress, all that in the passenger seat while I was driving ... I'm not that flexible and might end up dressed like superman with the underwear over my trousers

Should I do something with her back ? I don't quite like it ...
any title suggestions?

Thanks for looking!

[armando_m]

oops, fixed the image, it was not showing ...

[GB1]

Armando - Interesting pic (and write up) there. Some comments:

- She stands out against the background quite well.
- I would have liked to see a tad more area below her feet as it almost seems like they will be cut off. You could balance the top and bottom negative space, but I like that break in the tree line at the top.
- The slow shutter speed looks OK to me. Why do you think it's a problem?
- Looks like you added a vignette: this is good as it makes her stand out.
- Like the tree behind her.
- In all I think this is a success, though a few of her looking out into the distance, with intense confidence, may have been good too.

GB

[armando_m]

Thanks GB,
the slow shutter caused me to blur too many shots, this is the only decent one

I like the vignette to, it should have been the result of the lens being wide open, I did not add it,
or maybe the result of having a flash on her ?

Yes a bit of more space under her would have been nice ...

The rain dripping across the viewfinder was distracting :blush2:

[LeeIs]

Title: Morning breeze.

I don't mind the neck. I like everything about this shot. The only thing I might do, and only if it's done flawlessly, is removing the tree on the left. I think this shot becomes better without that.

Excellent shot!

[hminx]

Wuthering Heights ( Emily Bronte )
I also would like to see the tree gone, its a distraction IMO. This is very nice Armando, had the dress got really wet,...well who knows !!.....:blush2:

[Greg McCary]

How about Misty? I do think it needs a crop but it's a great picture.

[AgingEyes]

I think she should be closer to the right frame (right now she's bullseye).

Ridding the branches may not be a bad idea. Her back? Photoshop can help.

[Alexandre da Veiga]

I like her pose.
Like it somebody said before, she combines very well with the background. I would like to see more background and no ground, but for that, you would need more wind to lift the fabric.
The tree branches should not be there, but I feel like they give something to the image.
I would remove the hair on her face.

[armando_m]

Thanks for all the comments!

I have been busy and haven't got to edit this again

Pete, she did get really wet, the dress material remained as seen here

[daq7]

I cannot actually say my title suggestion. Sorry.

[armando_m]

I cannot actually say my title suggestion. Sorry.

aww c´mon .. ok PM me