time for a tune up

let me know what you think on this shot....
it is my first time using B&W
http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/j...y/IMG_2130.jpg

You need another car parked closer to you :)

This version could use more contrast.

I don't think you need another car but it would be interesting to have a brand new shiny car in front of the building.
I think this has lots of potential for reshoots and the only thing right now is that its too dark.
Could crop out the street and the top down to roof peak but you'd still have that garbage at top right.

im at work, does anyone one want to try to lighten it up, and crop?

Not bad first B&W by any means. There is a lot of dark gray area, could use more brightness some places. My main objection here is all the street and not enough area above the garage - ya should have titled the camera up about 5 degrees ! :)

definitely an interesting subject. Can you return to do some more shots?

G

Here's a couple edits btw. the second is corel's local equalization filter, plus a vignette.

thanks alot gb1 i love those edits!
its 5 minutes from home so ill have to try some more shot:D

What a great subject.....so many possibilities.

a colored car in front of the black & white garage?

I'd trya na angle that minimized the houses behind it also.

Nice find.

len