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  1. 10-31-2008, 09:33 AM #1
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    time out

    C&C welcome
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  2. 10-31-2008, 09:46 AM #2
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    Re: time out

    looks good, the truck is slightly distracting... maybe a minor crop to the right of the rear tire well? I like this picture though
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  3. 10-31-2008, 10:05 AM #3
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    Re: time out

    The truck is gone!
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  4. 10-31-2008, 10:42 AM #4
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    Re: time out

    Great capture! I love it. The DOF is perfect.

    Did you use any kind of flash? The little guy's face looks kind of washed out, I don't know if that would be a flash issue or something else though.
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  5. 10-31-2008, 03:17 PM #5
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    Re: time out

    This was shot with a 5d and the 70-200 ISO 200 shutter speed 200 at f/3.5 focal length 120mm all available light no flash.

    Thank you for all the comment,


    PS: can anyone spot out what else is wrong in this photo?

    Hint: there is three subject in this photo. I'm missing the second boy in the middle with dark hair my bad.
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  6. 10-31-2008, 03:18 PM #6
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    Re: time out

    Very nice capture. Removing that truck is a plus. The composition, Dof, colour and lighting are all very nicely done.

    I also like the light area behind the mind, it defines and pushes him out a bit more.
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  7. 11-01-2008, 09:35 AM #7
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    Re: time out

    Great shot well done, wish it was mine. S
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  8. 11-01-2008, 10:19 AM #8
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    Re: time out

    Quote Originally Posted by JTcooper
    This was shot with a 5d and the 70-200 ISO 200 shutter speed 200 at f/3.5 focal length 120mm all available light no flash.

    Thank you for all the comment,


    PS: can anyone spot out what else is wrong in this photo?

    Hint: there is three subject in this photo. I'm missing the second boy in the middle with dark hair my bad.
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  9. 11-01-2008, 02:06 PM #9
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    Re: time out

    Thank you everyone I have been try real hard though.
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  10. 11-01-2008, 04:34 PM #10
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    Re: time out

    Sweet. Nice DOF

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